M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 166,355 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Senryu - 88 Your Glow - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

roots down to the heart
face glowing like a candle
moon hides behind clouds

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Form: Senryu

Comments about Senryu - 88 Your Glow by M. Asim Nehal

  • Edward Kofi Louis (5/15/2016 1:02:00 AM)

    Love, peace and joy! Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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  • Wes Vogler (1/15/2016 12:47:00 AM)

    senryu once again. haiku is about nature Very nicely done. (Report) Reply

  • (12/5/2015 11:17:00 AM)

    Wonderful haiku, heart is the metaphor (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (12/2/2015 3:29:00 PM)

    Love, especially that described as romantic, has been written of well with this haiku (Report) Reply

  • (12/2/2015 9:35:00 AM)

    Fantastic Haiku...roots down to heart.......10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 2, 2015

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 13, 2016

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