Senryu: A Quick Decision Poem by Pallab Chaudhury

Senryu: A Quick Decision

Rating: 5.0


A quick decision
When one leg is on a boat
Other- on a bank.

Dated: 10th Nov 2022.



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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Wood 10 November 2022

Well, it made me laugh… but so very true, in fact an instant decision. A good 5*

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 10 November 2022

Arn't we all in that situation Bravo!

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 13 November 2022

Yeah, here needs quick decision because of life at stake! nice to read the senryu

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 12 November 2022

A Senryu that forces you to make a decision.........Top score + To my favourite

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 12 November 2022

Dear Pallab, This is a delightful riddle! Sometimes, we are in such a dilemma - whether to do or not to do.

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Richard Wlodarski 11 November 2022

Funny, yet thought-provoking. Let's all go for a ride to the shores of the new Eden. Great senryu, Pallab!

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Belle Wassermeister 10 November 2022

What's there to decide? Do you want to go ashore, or go for a ride?

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