Senryu Chain - 1 Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu Chain - 1

Rating: 4.3


flocks of flamingo --
after day's hard work in fields
a tangerine sky.

a returning cold
with no dragonfly around
just dagger to kill.

Thursday, March 17, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: senryu
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Wlodarski 18 March 2022

An outstanding senryu, Dr. Nehal!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 18 March 2022

reading this poem has put me in a world of Calm Thank U Bravo!

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Unnikrishnan E S 18 March 2022

Nice poem. Enjoyed reading..

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 March 2022

You are a perfect master in composing senryu. Structurally perfect and enormous beauty at the core of each piece...carry on dear Dr Nehal.

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Bill Cantrell 17 March 2022

Very nice work

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