Senryu Chain - A Wait Poem by M. Asim Nehal
Senryu Chain - A Wait
at the setting sun
ships return to the harbor
she searches blue flag.
with every passing car
boy thinks of his birthday gift
long traffic jam.
spider spinning web
my thoughts are elevated
we both wait for fly.
Waiting time is always long and it crawls, how beautifully you have described three situations.. A wife waiting for her hubby and a child waiting for his parents and the life waiting to fly...to live, for food and what not.5**
A wait is prescious but executing it is tiresome...if we manage we succeed else we perish missing the best. Good words.
A worth waiting fills life with hopes and delicate feelings. The senryo is amazingly composed.5 Stars.
Brilliant senryu as always. Very thought provoking.
There is always elegance in your poems. Those words are meant to have each other
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Excellent chain of thoughts on wait.5*