Senryu Chain - Analysis Of Lost Glory Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu Chain - Analysis Of Lost Glory

Rating: 4.6


trembling boat of love
In sea of expectations
shred ego to save

fragrance of flowers
diminishes with the time
only thorns survive

petals found in books
mementos of past glory
ashes of burials.

Tuesday, September 15, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: lost love,philosophical ,relationship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 15 September 2020

Very true words. Good metaphorical imagination. Mementos of past glory Ashes of burial All call to build castle On the plinth of lessons Sowed under circumstances To mature me little more As I grow up.

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Juhaina Tumlu 16 September 2020

fragrance of flowers diminishes with the time only thorns survive

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Indira Renganathan 16 September 2020

A lovely realistic poem....well written...10 ++++++....thanks for your comment on me as a poetess rated to 423 out of 500 Asim

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Shreya Hacks 15 September 2020

Nice chain with selected theme wisely.

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S H 15 September 2020

All three power packed and meaningful.

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Poetic Sky 15 September 2020

5 Star poem. New rating with new poem and new format.

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