on the edge of time
i see my dreams hanging
I am watching clouds
Hold tight to your dreams cause they are yours to be cherished.
A thoughtful three-liner! You are a very talented poet....I see a great future in you. Carry the good work on.
Lovely imagination, 'on the edge of time I see my dreams, when watching clouds.... beautiful
on the edge of time........we all are living i see my dreams hanging......hope I am watching clouds...........desires floating.
Dreams hanging on the edge of the time and we are watching it like passing clouds Brilliant.5***
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Asim, your three lines are so revelatory. You make this event so sigificant. You have only a few moments (" on the edge of time" ;) to capture this fleeting moment of the reality of dreams. " I am watching clouds" - like time itself, the cloud formations must be apprehended quickly or they change past recognition. But in the suspended moment of the poem, I'm at your side, marveling at this transient beauty.