Senryu: Life! Poem by David Wood

Wow! Wonderful three-liner. Yes! It is very true about my life too. The intrigues of life can not be expressed more vividly and more searingly. Full score.

A brilliant depiction of life in just minimal lines. A great Senryu. Top Marks! ! !

Few words speaks volumes. I can relate to this Senryu.

mine too

We can certainly feel, the sense of defeat. Fantastic, brevity!

Sorry you missed the boat, But your poetry certainly strikes, The right, Notes.

While it sounds a bit sad to be on the pier, it may be the best thing that can happen sometimes

Dear David, this is a great and powerful poem.

What a great and powerful poem. While standing on the pier whiler the liner sails away, sounds a bit sad, it is not rarely the best thing that can happen to us.