Senryu Paper Roses Comments

what in heart came to mind came to sight in dream of awake every thing became you

Paper roses are imitations. Yet they do not fade. Beautiful poem.

Yes just imitation! Well done!

nice love to read dis.......: -)

Hello Heather as always your poem is beautiful i still have not mastered the art of senryu So my admiration knows no bounds

Art of imitation humane thank you Heather loved reading your wisdom burst the Senryu

Beautiful poem Heather. Very true said, imitation exists.Short and sweet.

A short sweet poem, miming people and poetry is possible..... good imagery.... I like it.

A great little poem, there is a lot of imitations in life we have to watch out for.