Senryu- Past Life Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu- Past Life

Rating: 4.8


tracing own footprints
travels down the memories
countless errors seen

Senryu- Past Life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 13 October 2020

You are very right. Memories are transferred through life. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned.

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Shreya Hacks 13 October 2020

Past- countless errors seen, Fantastic.

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Anjandev Roy 13 October 2020

Countless errors seen.....brilliant......thank u, dear friend....anjandev roy.

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Michael Jack 13 October 2020

Wonderful senryu. Looking past will let us know what all we did.

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Varsha M 13 October 2020

Yes very true words.

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Suresh Kumar Ek 15 October 2020

That shows wisdom Asimji

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Suzon Albert 14 October 2020

Past is always troublesome when you look from future.

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Deepak S S 14 October 2020

we laugh and smile on our fast a very interesting three line poem by you on looking back at memories and trying to figure out what was done in a manner which would be changed now

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Poetic Sky 14 October 2020

Past is eventually series of mistakes.

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 October 2020

Life's journey! ! Problems to overcome! Memories of the past. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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