a lonely darkness
wanders the thicket forest
in full of regrets
Lonely darkness in thick forest full of regret......what a beautiful plot. Message of loneliness that brought regret. Beautiful haiku.
This is an elegant indirect language for writing poetry, as man and his pronouns are absent within this text, but things express the human world and the feelings and message of the poet, so the darkness and the forest are two symbols in this poem and have been used as a beautiful metaphor, well done with 5 stars
Easy M.A.N. It sounds like bush fires ravaging Wisconsin, Australia etc. Am i right?
Darkness is just like thickness of forest. Wonderful expression makes this poem special work! Sun will sprinkle light soon to remove darkness. Thank you for sharing! ..full 5 stars!
loneliness living terrible wood in crowded all water isn't life!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Regrets are a part and parcel of life. Never allow to seep into your life. Nice senryu.10+