Mohammed Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 233,311 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Senryu - Sign Of Love - Poem by Mohammed Asim Nehal

feeling restlessness
in the state of confusion
beginning of love

Topic(s) of this poem: love and dreams

Form: Senryu


Comments about Senryu - Sign Of Love by Mohammed Asim Nehal

  • Indira Renganathan (4/18/2019 11:00:00 AM)

    Very very true...how to open up with the love proposal definitely gives one restlessness and confusion...
    nice senryu- 10++
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  • Edward Kofi Louis (4/10/2019 3:48:00 AM)

    Feeling restlessness! !
    Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (4/8/2019 8:45:00 PM)

    Love motivates mind and beautifully enhances quality of inner glow. This poem is an interesting poem very well penned.10 (Report)Reply

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  • Mahtab Bangalee (4/8/2019 4:47:00 AM)

    Love
    makes active
    the lazy brain!
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  • Nosheen Irfan (4/7/2019 5:16:00 AM)

    Wowww beautifully expressed. A gem of a piece.10 (Report)Reply

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  • (4/6/2019 1:49:00 PM)

    Classic senryu, short and meaningful (Report)Reply

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  • Dr Dillip K Swain (4/6/2019 5:15:00 AM)

    An excellent Senryu on Love and dreams! Thanks for sharing.......................10 (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 6, 2019



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