Artificial breaths,
Like mimicking feelings of
Love with empty souls,
Artificial love,
Like sex mimics of drugged, raped
Girls, being in chains,
Artificial sex,
Like mimicking life in the
Dolls for making love,
Artificial life,
Like raping dead women to
Sate sadistic needs,
Artificial need,
Like rape mimics during sex
For excitation
And excitations,
Like artificial breaths for
Necrophiliacs.
Poem by Marieta Maglas
Great write very powerful and speaks the truth and the exact emotions associated with these poor rape victimes soul.
Beautifully written poem, Marieta! As long as different people are part of nowadays society, alas, all these gruesome and disgusting facts, will always follow human history. Human mind always fascinates me; unfortunately, sometimes people's nature goes way beyond the limits of reason... Thank you for sharing. ~Besa
A very very powerful poem, the truth is a hard thing to take. A really great poem.
I am a world before I am a man I was a creature before I could stand I will remember before I forget Before I forget that ...... Great piece with highly influenced philosophical doctrines of love hate human and so forth......
that was awesome. i had to read it twice to get a full understanding.
For some reason, the graphic portrayals you display in this poem work perfectly, in morbid harmony. Bravo!
Nice. i appreciated it a lot. It is an interesting improvement on Nivedita's. U summed up a lot of things too and i agree with u.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
hmm I read Ms Bagchi's n now I've read urs.........Rapers= Necromantic...............no doubt both r very strong and expressive ...both convey meanings.. it's an honest way of expression.... very strong.. a lot can be debated..., but debates waste time..... in wich a lot can be done....practical approach is required ....nevertheless a great job....seems like Ms Bagchi has planted a seed n now it's turning into a tree....