Sextuple Senryu For Artificial Things Poem by Marieta Maglas

Sextuple Senryu For Artificial Things

Rating: 4.8


Artificial breaths,
Like mimicking feelings of
Love with empty souls,

Artificial love,
Like sex mimics of drugged, raped
Girls, being in chains,

Artificial sex,
Like mimicking life in the
Dolls for making love,

Artificial life,
Like raping dead women to
Sate sadistic needs,

Artificial need,
Like rape mimics during sex
For excitation

And excitations,
Like artificial breaths for
Necrophiliacs.

Poem by Marieta Maglas

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is dedicated to the poetess MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI, after reading her poem ''I WANT TO BE RAPED''Note: Necrophilia = obsession with and usually erotic interest in or stimulation by corpses (Merriam Webster) and also =1. Obsessive fascination with death and corpses.2. Erotic attraction to or sexual contact with corpses.(Farlex dictionary)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sharad Juneja 01 June 2012

hmm I read Ms Bagchi's n now I've read urs.........Rapers= Necromantic...............no doubt both r very strong and expressive ...both convey meanings.. it's an honest way of expression.... very strong.. a lot can be debated..., but debates waste time..... in wich a lot can be done....practical approach is required ....nevertheless a great job....seems like Ms Bagchi has planted a seed n now it's turning into a tree....

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Eman Obied 01 June 2012

Great write very powerful and speaks the truth and the exact emotions associated with these poor rape victimes soul.

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Besa Dede 01 June 2012

Beautifully written poem, Marieta! As long as different people are part of nowadays society, alas, all these gruesome and disgusting facts, will always follow human history. Human mind always fascinates me; unfortunately, sometimes people's nature goes way beyond the limits of reason... Thank you for sharing. ~Besa

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Dave Walker 01 June 2012

A very very powerful poem, the truth is a hard thing to take. A really great poem.

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Amir Forougi 01 June 2012

I am a world before I am a man I was a creature before I could stand I will remember before I forget Before I forget that ...... Great piece with highly influenced philosophical doctrines of love hate human and so forth......

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Liliana Roman 17 August 2012

that was awesome. i had to read it twice to get a full understanding.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 28 June 2012

An awful situation portrayed here. Clearly upsetting.

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Ravi Sathasivam 16 June 2012

Great poem. Agree with your thoughts madam. Well done. tfs

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James Merchant 09 June 2012

For some reason, the graphic portrayals you display in this poem work perfectly, in morbid harmony. Bravo!

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Kebe Iwara 08 June 2012

Nice. i appreciated it a lot. It is an interesting improvement on Nivedita's. U summed up a lot of things too and i agree with u.

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Marieta Maglas

Marieta Maglas

Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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