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Ayni Poet

Shades Of The Transparent

Mystical dust thrown in the air,
The show of life presents its plots
Hell and ecstasy braided like hair,
Endless games creation plays!

Through tunnels, deserts and forests,
Under the sea's moist, warm dress,
Along sharp canyons and untold stories,
All paths arise and fall back into the Void!

No one sees it but it sees everyone,
Rain and lips touch only in its graceful presence,
Thought flies through its vastness,
The Heart is its other name.

Topic(s) of this poem: heart, life, spirit, awakening, consciousness

Poem Submitted: Saturday, May 2, 2020
Poem Edited: Saturday, May 2, 2020

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  • Erfan K WandoorErfan K Wandoor (5/6/2020 6:30:00 AM)

    Wonderful poem. Please read my poems and expect your kind suggestions

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  • Ratnakar Mandlik (5/5/2020 11:12:00 PM)

    A pleasant life song, inspirational as also dipped in positive attitude. Heartiest Congrats on poem of the day.

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  • Chinedu DikeChinedu Dike (5/5/2020 8:46:00 PM)

    Well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing.

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  • Jagdish Singh RamánaJagdish Singh Ramána (5/5/2020 12:00:00 PM)

    Great! Well deserved poem. Congratulations for the POD.

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  • Harley WhiteHarley White (5/5/2020 9:45:00 AM)

    A lovely, lyrical poem, deserving of poem of the day...

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  • Aqua FlowerAqua Flower (5/5/2020 9:43:00 AM)

    Congratulations on this poem being selected for the day! A very poignant write. " All paths arise and fall back into the Void! " Desperation at it's peek. Nicely penned.

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  • Edward Kofi LouisEdward Kofi Louis (5/5/2020 7:33:00 AM)

    Endless games! !
    Muse of life with the romance of nature.

    Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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  • Dominic WindramDominic Windram (5/5/2020 4:54:00 AM)

    Delightful poem of the day...congratulations!

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  • Bernard F. AsuncionBernard F. Asuncion (5/5/2020 2:23:00 AM)

    A well penned poem of the day.
    Well expressed and beautifully
    crafted....10+++

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  • Dr Tony BrahminDr Tony Brahmin (5/5/2020 1:42:00 AM)

    No one sees it but it sees everyone,
    Rain and lips touch only in its graceful presence,
    Thought flies through its vastness, It is the heart. so much of thinking and imagination have gone into this poem. love it. tony

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  • Mahtab BangaleeMahtab Bangalee (5/5/2020 1:23:00 AM)

    All paths arise and fall back into the Void!
    ..Thought flies through its vastness,
    The Heart is its other name... everything takes birth in another womb and comes out spontenously; heart a nature where are stored all sense of moulding worlding and in course of time it expresses its innter theory but the wise can notify its earlier sprouting // suerb poem penned; congrats for being selected as POD

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  • Ramesh T ARamesh T A (5/5/2020 12:44:00 AM)

    Mystical outlook though covers all aspects Nature and all, no one notices it due to its transparency ever! Nice one indeed! Congratulations to the Poet for the selection his poem as Member Poem of the Day by PH!

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