Dave Alan Walker

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Shadows Of The Past - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

As I rise through
the shadows
of the past

Silhouettes of fire
burn through
my hearts desire

Telling me
I have a life to live
and life to give


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  • Jinal Oswal (11/11/2011 8:44:00 AM)

    'I have a life to live
    and life to give'
    A real powerful end... It encourages... Wonderful write :)
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  • Denis Martindale (10/17/2011 12:59:00 PM)

    You may wish to read this follow-up tribute poem:

    http: //tinyurl.com/whereshadowsfall
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  • (10/10/2011 3:32:00 AM)

    This is a beautiful poem! shadows of the past remain with us, they just become easier to manage, truly a magnificent poem...... (Report)Reply

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  • Vipins Puthooran (10/7/2011 11:25:00 AM)

    And If we live through the path of truth, the wings of darkness will be broken unless live and let live! ! ! !
    A good poem
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  • (10/6/2011 1:27:00 AM)

    Short but powerful, like these little gems that pack a lot of punch...great write.
    -SG
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  • (10/5/2011 8:29:00 PM)

    interesting... wish i was as lively as you.
    Haha. good job
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  • (10/5/2011 3:08:00 PM)

    Living through the darkness is a hard task, but you're strong enough to have done it, and to do it again. Lovely poetry, one of my favourites of yours. (Report)Reply

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  • (10/5/2011 1:48:00 PM)

    Love it! ! it was short and sweet thanks for the invite to read (Report)Reply

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  • (10/5/2011 11:00:00 AM)

    though it's short its still good, nice poem. (Report)Reply

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  • Unwritten Soul (10/5/2011 8:21:00 AM)

    Bomb! I like this..YES we need to be bright and do and should do like this...Pain and deepest hurt could be a part where it trying to constrain our strength.if we pass it we will win...and ready for next test.. :) Again it was beautifully written...Fight for live and there's more to give a hope to other...It simply Great, Dave! _Unwritten Soul (Report)Reply

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  • (10/5/2011 8:09:00 AM)

    Three stanzas, each can be said or read undr one breath. And yes, the conclution is wonderfully stated. You did well here. I like what you have done here with this short verse.

    Keep it up!
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  • (10/5/2011 7:47:00 AM)

    yes you do! great poem! (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 5, 2011

Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 25, 2011


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