Shaky Finances Poem by Belle Wassermeister

Shaky Finances

Rating: 5.0


my finances
are in bad shape

just yesterday
I dropped a bundle
in the market

broke a whole
dozen eggs
and a jar
of peanut butter

Tuesday, December 31, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: poverty
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cowboy Ron Williams 22 July 2022

Subtle humor at its best. Good work, Belle.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 March 2022

I am looking at the sensitive aspect of this poem! Poverty....magnified!

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There IS no sensitive aspect, Dillip. The poem is simply a joke, a play on words!

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Aniruddha Pathak 01 January 2020

The year that comes is never any better or worse, It is man that makes it so, this poem in a way says this.

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I think you missed the point, Aniruddha!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 01 January 2020

A witty poem is well composed 😅😅😅....10+++

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Why the question marks, Bernard? ? ? ? ? Yes, it is! ! ! ! !

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Kim Barney 31 December 2019

Ha! That is very funny, Belle!

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So, at least one person caught on...

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Belle Wassermeister

Belle Wassermeister

Gleichen, Alberta, Canada
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