She Poem by lady grace

She

Rating: 5.0


she...the apple of your eyes
the goddess whom you pray
the flower you idolize
the fountain of your dreams...

she...the princess of your day
the love of your life
the breath that you take
the rainbow of your hope...

she...the woman
the model
the queen
the inspiration...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ravi Sathasivam 12 January 2010

Excellent! Well penned Nice portrait. enjoyed 10+

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Marieta Maglas 11 January 2010

excellent extended metaphor she...the princess of your day the love of your life the breath that you take the rainbow of your hope... nice portrait, very well written poem 10/10

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 01 January 2010

Indeed it’s a Great indeed...s[he] embosoms the he LOL! But he forgets she sometime… Ms Nivedita UK

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 31 December 2009

i thing the poem addresses man. then it is perfectly right. shan

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Eyan Desir 31 December 2009

hmmm, this made me think of a woman.. well lets hope this woman you wrote about keeps shining like the sun

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