She Carries A Heavy Heart Poem by Aqua Flower

She Carries A Heavy Heart

Rating: 5.0


There in the doorway
separated light from dark
there was a new day
but with it came a heavy heart
it was the price she paid
where turmoil was the trade
she left it all behind
there ahead was a new day
but bittersweet it was
right from the very start
for now and forever
she'll carry her heavy heart

Copyright @ Aqua Flower
2020

Saturday, August 22, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: heart,regret
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 23 August 2020

This is beautiful Poetry. Yes at times things do happen.

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Aqua Flower 19 November 2020

Thank you Varsha for you inspiring comment!

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Aqua Flower 12 September 2020

I wish I could reply to all of you but the reply button does not have a submit button. I'm sure you all know that. I will try to write and screen shot them so they can see. Ugh someone needs to get them to fix it! It is our communication to our fellow poets. Aqua Flowere

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Khairul Ahsan 19 November 2020

Dear Poet, Now you can click the submit button, which appears there unlike previously, but you cannot readily see the reply. It will not appear immediately, but after 3/4 days you and the recipient can see your replies. So keep replying, without bothering to see immediately. Khaiul

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Khairul Ahsan 09 September 2020

'but bittersweet it was right from the very start for now and forever she'll carry her heavy heart' - A poem of sad, poignant thoughts, but the beauty lies in its expression. We all have our fair share of sadness to carry with us, so cheer up, dear poet.

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Paul Brookes 03 September 2020

A well written poem of pain and how we all carry some enjoyed

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Amir Marandi 24 August 2020

Carrying pain of the past and perhaps regret for the decision gone wrong. A sad poem that somehow resonates with me.

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Carl Roussell 24 August 2020

At times moving ahead means leaving something behind. A 10!

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