Leslie Alexis

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She's A Mystery (Awdl Gywydd) - Poem by Leslie Alexis

Hey, listen, do you hear that?
A voice that's seraphical,
Is singing the songs of love,
Of love which is sensual!

A mystical song she sings
And with it, she rings my name.
Listen to her flawless tones,
Even her moans are of fame.

I see her, she sits right there,
Where the vines make the archway.
A brown-haired angelic girl,
One singing as she crochets.

An angel draped in flowers,
Her face stained with innocence,
Her chaste lips and eyes giving
Inklings of her existence.

Her kiss awakens the crocus.
It is a must; it's so mild!
Akin to a gentle breeze,
Or leaves touching a child.

Her voice tells songbirds to sing,
Causing harmony between
Nightingales and canaries.
Her duties are of a queen.

Where have we entered, brother?
Brother where she stands - even
If I never share one kiss,
With this angel - is Heaven!

'Lady, I fear that I'm in love!
Love, tell me your name, will you?
Truest soul that I've yet seen,
You are a queen, am I true? '

Brother, you hear this, listen,
Listen as she speaks to me,
Her voice is like answered prayers,
And her sweet name: Mystery.

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Amélie is a wonderful woman. God bless her.

Comments about She's A Mystery (Awdl Gywydd) by Leslie Alexis

  • (11/13/2011 6:05:00 AM)

    Nice, Love it I like it (Report) Reply

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  • (11/12/2011 3:00:00 AM)

    hi, Leslie.i didn.t sow ur age, but the poem is good, is rite from love, and is grait...but u have some lirycs were is not existing right ryme...and rythm..but the message of poem is very goodd (Report) Reply

  • Darkangel Flyfree (11/11/2011 11:25:00 PM)

    I love it its awsome. I love a man that can write some beautiful and romantic poetry. (Report) Reply

  • (11/11/2011 11:22:00 PM)

    Great! :) ... as i digested the lines i could franky imagine her, Bravo! It a divine piece indeed (Report) Reply

  • Kaila George (11/11/2011 7:29:00 PM)

    Its a wonderful poem, so sweet and gracefuly written, crys...at the beauty of the poem. (Report) Reply

  • (11/11/2011 7:15:00 PM)

    beautiful poetry, written by a gentle heart! (Report) Reply

  • (11/11/2011 4:54:00 PM)

    Hi Leslie I liked the gentle feeling of being almost enveloped in heavenly choral bliss and can imagine your ST Amelie perfectly.Well done! 10 (Report) Reply

  • (11/11/2011 12:06:00 PM)

    I really enjoyed reading this very much! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Hans Vr (11/11/2011 9:21:00 AM)

    You picture Amelie in such a wonderful poetic way, that the reader of this poem would have wished to be there and see. very well done, Leslie. (Report) Reply

  • Jinal Oswal (11/11/2011 9:19:00 AM)

    Wonderfully imagined.. you sketch a virtual world around the reader.. Thanks for sharing this.. Nice 1 :) (Report) Reply

  • (11/11/2011 8:58:00 AM)

    hey leslie...nice! ! :) (Report) Reply

  • (11/11/2011 8:49:00 AM)

    A truly great poem. Really good write.
    Really enjoyed reading it.
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  • Anil Kumar Panda (7/20/2011 6:11:00 AM)

    what an fantastic imagery! ! ! beautiful ink.liked it. (Report) Reply

  • (7/20/2011 12:08:00 AM)

    You have created the perfect girl of your dreams, Amelie. I love the way you describe
    her so pure and her singing so beautiful.
    Love the last two lines. I'm sure you will meet someone like that one day.
    Blessing to you.
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  • Abdallah Gamal (7/19/2011 11:57:00 PM)

    So romantic and lovely poem, , the story that u made it up in ur poem inspiring the whole world around me, , It's more than a love story like in the movies cuz the difference between love story of Romeo and Juliet for example and ur love story, , is that the love story of the movie was written by script writer while urs was written by God, , Imagine the difference between them, , nice poem my friend, , love ur work rated 10 :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 30, 2010

Poem Edited: Saturday, October 19, 2013

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