She's Like A River Poem by Jazlle D. H. **contentment is the key to happiness

Gentle tone, and tempting words. Lovely poem, all the best

nice poem.....flow like a river

I enjoy the hypnotic feel I get when reading this poem. It has an 'undercurrent' of entrapment. One that is invited. Nice.

write best in words The silent flow it seems alluring, calm

well, tell me, who is she? ...a short nice poem piece...

love your small poems like this one..few words and few lines but you do a long story and issue discussed inside.. well done... I really enjoyed this one and read few times to feel and enjoy it...really a great piece of poem..with rich idea...10+++++++++

This poem says so much in so few words. Well done, Tango.

Wow! That is a wonderful metaphor. You accomplish the seemingly impossible for me. I find it very difficult to express myself in such few words. This poem is beautiful! You are very talented in your work.

Small is beautiful, u proved it.

Short, but a very nice piece regards Tom