She's Like A River Poem by Jazlle D. H. **contentment is the key to happiness

She's Like A River

Rating: 4.4


As I gaze
in every angle
I cannot resist.
The warm appearance
caught my attention.
The silent flow
it seems alluring,
calm yet so deep.

6th May 2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dan Gelinas 04 July 2008

This is a great metaphor =) I like this one.

0 0 Reply
Duncan Wyllie 06 July 2008

Delicate and soft by nature, well done Love duncan X

0 0 Reply
Ravi Sathasivam 06 July 2008

I like this simple poem Great write. Thanks for sharing Ravi

0 0 Reply
Kesav Easwaran 06 July 2008

well, tell me, who is she? ...a short nice poem piece...

0 0 Reply
Kee Thampi 07 July 2008

write best in words The silent flow it seems alluring, calm

0 0 Reply
Afzal Shauq 24 June 2009

love your small poems like this one..few words and few lines but you do a long story and issue discussed inside.. well done... I really enjoyed this one and read few times to feel and enjoy it...really a great piece of poem..with rich idea...10+++++++++

0 0 Reply
Tango 01 January 2009

This poem says so much in so few words. Well done, Tango.

0 0 Reply
Maura Sanchez 30 August 2008

Wow! That is a wonderful metaphor. You accomplish the seemingly impossible for me. I find it very difficult to express myself in such few words. This poem is beautiful! You are very talented in your work.

0 0 Reply
Ashraful Musaddeq 28 August 2008

Small is beautiful, u proved it.

0 0 Reply
Tom Balch 27 August 2008

Short, but a very nice piece regards Tom

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success