She Snapped The Neck Poem by Rini Shibu

She Snapped The Neck

Rating: 5.0


A red eyed vulture flew over her head
Shadows of wide opened wings fell on her
It came to her life like a twister tornado
and it was hard to withstand the blow
Darkness surrounded and nothing was visible
It made her blind and very much frightened
Targeting it's prey it flew towards her
But it didn't notice her brilliant move
She snapped it's neck and chopped it's wings
Never again those dark shadows appeared
Then she said 'I am not afraid anymore
and no force can touch me evermore.'

Thursday, April 5, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: story
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subhas Chandra Chakra 05 April 2018

A lovely adventurous story, new to your readers and fans. Please add one of this type a week, . Thanks dear Rini for the sharing.

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Robert Murray Smith 20 June 2018

A powerful write. We see the picture very clearly.++10

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Rebecca Navarre 16 April 2018

A Very Heart Felt And Powerful Story, Poem! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Endless 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Rini Shibu 17 April 2018

Thanks Rebecca Navarre..! ! ! ! ! !

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Kostas Lagos 07 April 2018

A great poem with an unexpected conclusion!

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Rini Shibu 07 April 2018

Thanks Kostas..! ! Rini

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Lamar Cole 05 April 2018

This is a very thrilling and very interesting write.

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Rini Shibu 07 April 2018

Thanks Lamar for posting your remarks..! ! Rini

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 April 2018

Strain, pain! Never again! Thanks for sharing.

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Rini Shibu 07 April 2018

Thanks Edward for visiting this poem.., ! ! Rini

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