Flat line on the screen
No breath and beats
Only tears and screams
She left him forever
But gave lot of sweet momories
to treasure forever
lovely poem sad and sweet glad they yeah did meet at least RJ ur creative thanks for reading me
She left him forever but gave lot of sweet momories to treasure forever....pathetic but unforgettable!
Oh! Very well presented, Rini. The line on screen is flat, showing that heart has stopped beating. She is no more. Left him forever... A death so common. But an uncommon poem. A poem to be treasured.
Death of a loved one, leaving behind sweet memories, inspiring to write an impressive poem in her memory.
When she met the death her lover or husband was on tears and screaming having lot of sweet memories of the past. A beautiful poem on life and death nicely shared.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Rini, this is the sadness that is seen in hospitals. Extremely well penned. Everything we need to know is in your few lines. That's poetry at its best. You have climbed the mountain.++10