Bri Edwards

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She Used Tight Security ... [chastity; Humor; Limerick; Didn'T Really Happen! ] - Poem by Bri Edwards

I once met a cute girl named Jane,
who drove me completely insane.
She took off her bra,
but I didn't get fa,
'cause she was guarded by lock and a chain.

(March 9, 2015)

Topic(s) of this poem: humorous


Poet's Notes about The Poem

this little thing was an extension of a shorter poem i wrote in a response to a message from another (male?) PH member.

he had referred to my original 4-line poem as a limerick and i think a limerick has 5 lines, SO i just had to revise it. :) bri

Comments about She Used Tight Security ... [chastity; Humor; Limerick; Didn'T Really Happen! ] by Bri Edwards

  • Lyn Paul (7/7/2015 5:55:00 PM)


    Like that lock and chain idea!
    Thank You Bri
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  • (3/17/2015 4:00:00 PM)


    This limerick has me in stitches.
    In fact I think I've wet my britches.

    Nice one Bri. Should have been r at the end of fa though. I'll excuse you this time.
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  • Noreen Carden (3/12/2015 7:16:00 AM)


    Well this gave me a laugh. As we say here Bri you're a holy terror thanks for the smile I needed it today (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, March 9, 2015



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