Shock Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Shock

Rating: 5.0


Man is social animal
Often he does for society,
He brings happiness, fraternity
Secrifice and prosperity.

But sometimes he has to face
Treachery, treason and swizz,
And he gets shock himself
He doesn't feel life ease.

This shock may be reduced
If he meditates to God,
Nobody can shut down him
On the other hand they will nod.

Spiritual life leads to peace
Bliss, happiness and co-operation,
Power of tolerance, adjustment are
Developed, no mind for competition.

Let's have spiritual life
And we will be free from shock,
The path of life will be clear
There will be no hindrance no rock.

Friday, September 23, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is a simple poem based on spiritual life.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 27 September 2016

the path to happiness is through spiritual way of living! well said and thank you for sharing

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Clarence Prince 27 September 2016

Spiritual life leads to peace, Let's have spiritual life The spirit of God is peaceful, Let's live peaceful with others!

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 27 September 2016

A good write on spirituality - the ultimate shock-absorber! (10)

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M Asim Nehal 15 March 2019

Nothing less than 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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M Asim Nehal 15 March 2019

Such a wonderful poem with apt title Let's have spiritual life And we will be free from shock, The path of life will be clear There will be no hindrance no rock

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Indira Renganathan 13 March 2019

'Spiritual life leads to peace Bliss, happiness and co-operation, Power of tolerance, adjustment are Developed, no mind for competition.'...more than being religious, being spiritual does balm our hurt or guilty hearts in a better way....because spirituality helps us learn life's real nature by a more vivid way...interesting write 10

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 October 2016

Spiritual life leads to peace! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Valsa George 30 September 2016

The shocks of life can be mitigated by our faith and dependence on God! The need for spirituality is beautifully affirmed in this poem!

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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