Short Poem - Between Dreams And Realities. Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Short Poem - Between Dreams And Realities.

Rating: 5.0


Somewhere between her sunset and my sunrise
we both lost in dreams of love
Finally, to rise in the realities of life.

Saturday, October 17, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: dreams,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Loke Kok Yee 17 October 2015

Short but so sweet. Thanks-10

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Kelly Kurt 17 October 2015

Between dreams and reality is where most love lives. Nicely written, Mohammed

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Darren Jkoeryo 28 May 2016

What a comparison, Asim.10 I liked it.

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Darren Jkoeryo 28 May 2016

What a comparison, Asim.10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 October 2015

Dreams of love and life with light of sunrise are well described with lines of expression with imagery shared here. Very interesting poem shared really....10

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T Rajan Evol 17 October 2015

Punch line of your shot poem is between the sunset and sunrise, very effective one.

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Sanjukta Nag 17 October 2015

Sunset to sunrise... may love doesn't find time to take rest. beautiful poem. Love is beyond rating.

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