Poem-1
Sweltering Summer
Concrete roads slither
A cuckoo coos
Poem-2
The sky darkened
Rain lashing window panes
I sip hot coffee.
Poem-3
The big banyan tree
Spreading its branches
A cow resting under.
Poem-4
A dark cloud hangs
Golden sunrays scattered
A rainbow appear.
Poem-5
Night falls slowly
Trees, mountains, rivers disappearing
Stars twinkle in the sky.
Anything through the eyes of Ms. Bharathi seems beautiful and amazing! And so are these beautiful short lines so sweet to fill the hearts of readers with bliss. Optimistic in view and captivating in thought!
Your comments are really very encouraging, dear Queeny Gona Thank you very much..Stay blessed.
A dark cloud hangs Golden sunrays scattered A rainbow appear... my nature poetess. Kudos to you. a lot of praises today. to you dear Bharati, tony
Ha Ha ha! ! ! i now see that i commented in 2018, and this already is in MyPoemList. time to look at another one. bri :)
#4 i'd say " appears" i enjoyed all five, but especially #2. it sounds inviting. maybe add a few slices of poetic pizza? ? to MyPoemList bri :)
Most wonderful poem madam. Unbelievable. So beautiful.100++++++++++++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Hi Bharati, Exquisite little poems, full of positivity. Of course, that is what your poems are about. Only Bharati can hear and enjoy a cuckoo cooing in Sweltering summer and slithering concrete roads. And only her poetic heart can see the twinkling stars in the sky, when everything disappears into the black hole of night. Her positive thinking tries to visualize a silver lining in every dark cloud. Very powerful poem. Fantastic imeages, speaking directly to the readers' heart.10++++
Thank you for your feedback.It is really inspiring.