Short Poems Poem by Bharati Nayak

Short Poems

Rating: 5.0


Poem-1
Sweltering Summer
Concrete roads slither
A cuckoo coos

Poem-2
The sky darkened
Rain lashing window panes
I sip hot coffee.

Poem-3
The big banyan tree
Spreading its branches
A cow resting under.

Poem-4
A dark cloud hangs
Golden sunrays scattered
A rainbow appear.

Poem-5
Night falls slowly
Trees, mountains, rivers disappearing
Stars twinkle in the sky.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan E S 12 July 2016

Hi Bharati, Exquisite little poems, full of positivity. Of course, that is what your poems are about. Only Bharati can hear and enjoy a cuckoo cooing in Sweltering summer and slithering concrete roads. And only her poetic heart can see the twinkling stars in the sky, when everything disappears into the black hole of night. Her positive thinking tries to visualize a silver lining in every dark cloud. Very powerful poem. Fantastic imeages, speaking directly to the readers' heart.10++++

2 0 Reply
Bharati Nayak 14 July 2016

Thank you for your feedback.It is really inspiring.

0 0
Queeny Gona 14 July 2016

Anything through the eyes of Ms. Bharathi seems beautiful and amazing! And so are these beautiful short lines so sweet to fill the hearts of readers with bliss. Optimistic in view and captivating in thought!

1 0 Reply
Bharati Nayak 14 July 2016

Your comments are really very encouraging, dear Queeny Gona Thank you very much..Stay blessed.

0 0
M Asim Nehal 12 July 2016

Awesome! ! ! ! ! Very well written, I really enjoyed,10+++++

1 0 Reply
Dr Antony Theodore 22 February 2020

A dark cloud hangs Golden sunrays scattered A rainbow appear... my nature poetess. Kudos to you. a lot of praises today. to you dear Bharati, tony

0 0 Reply
Bri Edwards 10 January 2020

Ha Ha ha! ! ! i now see that i commented in 2018, and this already is in MyPoemList. time to look at another one. bri :)

0 0 Reply
Bri Edwards 10 January 2020

#4 i'd say " appears" i enjoyed all five, but especially #2. it sounds inviting. maybe add a few slices of poetic pizza? ? to MyPoemList bri :)

0 0 Reply
Fantone Mdala 08 May 2019

am liking the haiku style. Definitely, enjoyed these poems

0 0 Reply
Bhagabat Prasad Hotta 07 May 2019

Most wonderful poem madam. Unbelievable. So beautiful.100++++++++++++

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success