Signals Poem by Bharati Nayak
Signals
Traffic of thoughts
Line up
Jam around
Blocked at the crossings
There is buzz of whirring
Ting -tongs
Red signal
Making them to stand
Stop them from crossing
To the other side
Patience is wearing
When there is
long waits
Roads seem full
Nerves seem to burst
With yellow signal showing up
Hopes come to play
Thoughts liven up
Ready to go
Green signal makes them happy
Clearing the roads
As they gladly move ahead
Cheery thoughts
Rush forward
Singing and ringing.
Red signal symbolizing that a person is in a Green Room to wait and not to loose patience thereby yellow signal reflecting the hope of life to move ahead in near future and at the end the Green signal filling the hearts with joy in embracing the freedom!
Thank you Muhammad Ali for reading and giving your valuable opinions on my poems.
Wow excellent I seldom it's very much better than my poem.The scenery you penned down is more lively. The lines Ting -tongs Red signal Making them to stand Stop them from crossing To the other side Patience is wearing When there is long waits... I love the lines and the poem too.😍👍
" Traffic of thoughts" ? Wow! ! Great concept to view it from that angle. Great job
It's our conscience that controls the traffic of our thoughts, otherwise intincts excite and encorage to break the signals of the traffic of thoughts. An unique poem by Bharati Nayak, loved it.
Clearing the roads As they gladly move ahead l love your poem and writing 10++++++++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Traffic of thoughts what an idea! and yes it really happens. wonderful piece.