Bharati Nayak


Signals - Poem by Bharati Nayak

Traffic of thoughts
Line up
Jam around
Blocked at the crossings
There is buzz of whirring
Ting -tongs
Red signal
Making them to stand
Stop them from crossing
To the other side
Patience is wearing
When there is
long waits
Roads seem full
Nerves seem to burst
With yellow signal showing up
Hopes come to play
Thoughts liven up
Ready to go
Green signal makes them happy
Clearing the roads
As they gladly move ahead
Cheery thoughts
Rush forward
Singing and ringing.

Topic(s) of this poem: thoughts


Comments about Signals by Bharati Nayak

  • Binayakumar Mohanty (10/27/2017 5:51:00 AM)


    As they gladly move ahead
    cheery thoughts
    Rush forward
    Singing and ringing
    I move ahead with the lines
    Singing and ringing
    Nicely crafted poem mam.I enjoy.
    Regards
    Binaya
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  • (2/1/2017 5:40:00 AM)


    beautiful poem brought smile singing and ringing (Report) Reply

    Bharati Nayak Bharati Nayak (2/1/2017 7:14:00 AM)

    Thank you Muhammad Ali for reading and giving your valuable opinions on my poems.

  • (8/13/2016 2:04:00 AM)


    Terrific use of traffic symbols. A totally fresh way of viewing our creative problems!
    Looks like another one for my favourite poems' list! Yes and a certain 10, Bharati
    tom
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  • Queeny Gona (6/10/2016 1:11:00 AM)


    Red signal symbolizing that a person is in a Green Room to wait and not to loose patience thereby yellow signal reflecting the hope of life to move ahead in near future and at the end the Green signal filling the hearts with joy in embracing the freedom! (Report) Reply

    Bharati Nayak Bharati Nayak (6/10/2016 8:38:00 AM)

    Thank you Queeny for your nice comments.

  • (4/26/2016 9:47:00 AM)


    Signals we find all through the roads we tread, stopping us, directing us whither and thither! Ultimately, where we reach is our own destiny. Signals take no blame or claim. Great poetry. (Report) Reply

  • Sonali Ganguly (3/31/2016 3:13:00 AM)


    very beautiful lines mam..... (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (9/27/2015 9:37:00 AM)


    Ready to go along with the works of peace and love. Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (9/21/2015 1:58:00 AM)


    Traffic of thoughts what an idea! and yes it really happens. wonderful piece. (Report) Reply

  • Anil Kumar Panda (9/18/2015 3:12:00 AM)


    great concept. loved the way u inked the thoughts. (Report) Reply

  • (9/17/2015 6:08:00 PM)


    Well expressed thoughts (Report) Reply

  • (9/17/2015 1:29:00 AM)


    the thoughts waiting at the traffic signal...well done.. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 16, 2015



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