running headlong into noise concrete walls
running bounce bang bumps on head into concrete walls
dropping bumps on head stopping writing
is bumps on head noise cursed writer with no quiet
silent place to write writer's silence seeking
writer's hitting constant frustrating concrete noise walls;
Copyright © Terence George Craddock
A nice poetic imagination, Terence. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks
Sublime and abstract. Enjoyed the alliteration. Some fine muse here, the need for peace and quiet for writing. Thumbs up. So Nice to read from your pen again, I hope u too will review my latest poem titled, 'For all cheese chums'
I guess it's kinda like the marathon runner who hits a wall and can't go any further. That happened to me on the Grand Canyon. Guess what I did. I meditated. And what a transformation! Same thing with the writing. If I get writer's block, I meditate. And it's amazing what happens afterwards. Great poem. Really enjoyed it. Off to find the other one you mentioned.
Brilliant word choice, Terry. There's a halting, methodical reading created by the diction. As I read, it immediately takes me into the creative process, that deliberate, mesmerizing pace.quality that defines creativity. Brilliant!
The importance of silence for the creative flow to emerge...the walls, the noise, the concrete walls...the spasmodic rhythm of words, create a cadence that matches the speaker's intention. Great poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I do hope your head is not to sore after all that lol
metaphorical walls so no medication needed :)