when the sun shines in my eyes
it makes your reflection brighter
when the rain comes dancing down
it soaks me in your affection
when the breeze enters my heart
it sweeps away everything but you
when yonder hills echo
your name is everywhere
In this poem feelings remain inside while external sensations are internalized and love transforms them into enhancement of the senses. A nice take on love as sharpening of senses and enhanced celebration of the outside world and not just an internal (existential) drama of joy and suffering
when the rain comes dancing down it soaks me in your affection.It echoes everywhere..... your name........... fine, very endearing.. tony
When the sun shines! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Love is like sunshine and love carries sweet breeze. Love beautifully motivates mind and echos with tenderness. A perfectly expressed poem carries love and beauty. This is excellently penned.10
when the rain comes dancing down it soaks me in your affection.....lovely expression! A beautiful poem!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Today is a love feast on PH, this one is simple and fantastic poem, Loved your style.10