Simple Love Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Simple Love

Rating: 5.0


when the sun shines in my eyes
it makes your reflection brighter

when the rain comes dancing down
it soaks me in your affection

when the breeze enters my heart
it sweeps away everything but you

when yonder hills echo
your name is everywhere

Monday, January 14, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
An old poem I wrote as a very conventional n traditional love poem. Something that can be sung as a ditty.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
T Rajan Evol 14 January 2019

Today is a love feast on PH, this one is simple and fantastic poem, Loved your style.10

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Nadeem Ishaque 13 March 2019

In this poem feelings remain inside while external sensations are internalized and love transforms them into enhancement of the senses. A nice take on love as sharpening of senses and enhanced celebration of the outside world and not just an internal (existential) drama of joy and suffering

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Dr Antony Theodore 30 January 2019

when the rain comes dancing down it soaks me in your affection.It echoes everywhere..... your name........... fine, very endearing.. tony

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 January 2019

When the sun shines! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 January 2019

Love is like sunshine and love carries sweet breeze. Love beautifully motivates mind and echos with tenderness. A perfectly expressed poem carries love and beauty. This is excellently penned.10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 January 2019

when the rain comes dancing down it soaks me in your affection.....lovely expression! A beautiful poem!

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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