Sinking Paper Boat

Rating: 4.8
sailing in half sunk
inverse boat
other half is
filled
With muse
O agony sail on a paper boat;
wind is the captain.
drift far, far away
until it sinks
in depth
of holy fire
Saturday, October 3, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: emotions,sadness
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
sorrows agony chaos is sinking in the holy fire
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COMMENTS
Binayakumar Mohanty 19 October 2018
Nice poem.Thanks dear poet for sharing.10+I invite you to read and comment on my poem The wooden boat.Thanks.
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Ramesh Rai 21 November 2015
Beautiful emotion expressed through your mighty pen. Well done. Keep writing. Invite you to read Paper boat. Thanks for sharing. Stay blessed.
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Akhtar Jawad 20 November 2015
We see. we think, and as much we think we become more and more sad. How helpless we are, a toy in the hands of our fates.
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 November 2015
we have lot more to adore and feel with attempts to fill
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Dr Antony Theodore 17 November 2015
until it sinks in depth of holy fire you are becoming a mystic. All real poets are mystics. you are one. liked your poem very much. tony
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Amitava Sur 09 October 2015
Though very harsh but this is the bare truth of our life with which we have to move on. Thanks for speaking a truth.
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Musawir Raakh 05 October 2015
STRONG EXPRESSION FROM SHORT LINES, MAY YOU AGONIES SINK, MAY YOUR COMFORTS RISE
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Ramesh T A 03 October 2015
Eternal truth cannot be changed indeed!
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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 October 2015
Wonderful imagery. So nicely depicted. An intensive poem shared. Thank you dear Anita, keep the ball rolling.....10
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M Asim Nehal 03 October 2015
Awesome poem with nice picture.............10+++
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