sailing in half sunk
inverse boat
other half is
filled
With muse
O agony sail on a paper boat;
wind is the captain.
drift far, far away
until it sinks
in depth
of holy fire
Wonderful imagery. So nicely depicted. An intensive poem shared. Thank you dear Anita, keep the ball rolling.....10
STRONG EXPRESSION FROM SHORT LINES, MAY YOU AGONIES SINK, MAY YOUR COMFORTS RISE
Nice poem.Thanks dear poet for sharing.10+I invite you to read and comment on my poem The wooden boat.Thanks.
Beautiful emotion expressed through your mighty pen. Well done. Keep writing. Invite you to read Paper boat. Thanks for sharing. Stay blessed.
We see. we think, and as much we think we become more and more sad. How helpless we are, a toy in the hands of our fates.
we have lot more to adore and feel with attempts to fill
until it sinks in depth of holy fire you are becoming a mystic. All real poets are mystics. you are one. liked your poem very much. tony
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Awesome poem with nice picture.............10+++