Sinking Paper Boat
Rating: ★4.8
sailing in half sunk
inverse boat
other half is
filled
With muse
O agony sail on a paper boat;
wind is the captain.
drift far, far away
until it sinks
in depth
of holy fire
inverse boat
other half is
filled
With muse
O agony sail on a paper boat;
wind is the captain.
drift far, far away
until it sinks
in depth
of holy fire
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
sorrows agony chaos is sinking in the holy fire
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COMMENTS
Binayakumar Mohanty
19 October 2018
Nice poem.Thanks dear poet for sharing.10+I invite you to read and comment on my poem The wooden boat.Thanks.
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Ramesh Rai
21 November 2015
Beautiful emotion expressed through your mighty pen. Well done. Keep writing. Invite you to read Paper boat. Thanks for sharing. Stay blessed.
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Akhtar Jawad
20 November 2015
We see. we think, and as much we think we become more and more sad. How helpless we are, a toy in the hands of our fates.
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal
18 November 2015
we have lot more
to adore
and feel
with attempts to fill
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Dr Antony Theodore
17 November 2015
until it sinks
in depth
of holy fire you are becoming a mystic. All real poets are mystics. you are one. liked your poem very much. tony
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Amitava Sur
09 October 2015
Though very harsh but this is the bare truth of our life with which we have to move on. Thanks for speaking a truth.
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Musawir Raakh
05 October 2015
STRONG EXPRESSION FROM SHORT LINES, MAY YOU AGONIES SINK, MAY YOUR COMFORTS RISE
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Kumarmani Mahakul
03 October 2015
Wonderful imagery. So nicely depicted. An intensive poem shared. Thank you dear Anita, keep the ball rolling.....10
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