~ SIZE ZERO ~ GROUND ZERO ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK.
30.11.09.
Sz ~ burning calorie
Gz ~ bruising calorie.
Sz ~ trimming body
Gz ~ treading psyche.
Sz ~ blooming blush
Gz ~ bereavement hush.
Sz ~ fluent flowering
Gz ~ blued blurring.
Sz ~ Standing ovation of cheers
Gz ~ Standing elegy of tears.
Red Rose to Sz ~ Applause
Red Rose to Gz ~ Solace.
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But very humane and finer distinction is sliced and reached to acme: Sz ~ Standing ovation of cheers/Gz ~ Standing elegy of tears. Finely conceived 10++ PS My sincere thanks to Rediffusion Effusion for deep delving address about SZ and GZ
Sorry Niv but like Ravi A I did not get the theme after several tries and I want to give everyone who tried a 10+.
Honestly speaking I could not catch the theme in one or two readings.
Ideas and words met in a precise mathematical lines....
you are an interesting poet... your work is short yet it gets you to begin thinking about how things really are...
The grand state of 'Opposite, attraction' Like trying to fuse 2 hydrogen molecules! ! lol great work as always 10
SIZE ZERO - women's way to featherweightness GROUND ZERO - terrorists' traumatic torment of twin towers.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A poetry with difference…infused with high emotive elements…especially elegy for victims of any violence furiousness A poetry of polarized ideas SZ and GZ and well dictioned… thanks for such comparative study 10++ [as prayer marks for the victims] … dr.sakti PS Thanks for info to Rediffusion Effusion