~ Size Zero ~ Ground Zero ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ Size Zero ~ Ground Zero ~

Rating: 4.5


~ SIZE ZERO ~ GROUND ZERO ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK.
30.11.09.

Sz ~ burning calorie
Gz ~ bruising calorie.

Sz ~ trimming body
Gz ~ treading psyche.

Sz ~ blooming blush
Gz ~ bereavement hush.

Sz ~ fluent flowering
Gz ~ blued blurring.

Sz ~ Standing ovation of cheers
Gz ~ Standing elegy of tears.

Red Rose to Sz ~ Applause
Red Rose to Gz ~ Solace.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A poetry with difference…infused with high emotive elements…especially elegy for victims of any violence furiousness A poetry of polarized ideas SZ and GZ and well dictioned… thanks for such comparative study 10++ [as prayer marks for the victims] … dr.sakti PS Thanks for info to Rediffusion Effusion

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Katang Chakravorty 28 May 2010

But very humane and finer distinction is sliced and reached to acme: Sz ~ Standing ovation of cheers/Gz ~ Standing elegy of tears. Finely conceived 10++ PS My sincere thanks to Rediffusion Effusion for deep delving address about SZ and GZ

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Lynn Glover 07 May 2010

Sorry Niv but like Ravi A I did not get the theme after several tries and I want to give everyone who tried a 10+.

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Ravi A 10 March 2010

Honestly speaking I could not catch the theme in one or two readings.

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Dr. Ratan Bhattacharjee 22 February 2010

Ideas and words met in a precise mathematical lines....

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Ramesh Rai 28 May 2012

you have an unique style of composing poem. fantastic write.

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Seema Chowdhury 02 October 2010

you have a unique style. Good job, keep it up.

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Lysa Rohlsen 05 August 2010

you are an interesting poet... your work is short yet it gets you to begin thinking about how things really are...

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David Beckham 29 July 2010

The grand state of 'Opposite, attraction' Like trying to fuse 2 hydrogen molecules! ! lol great work as always 10

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Ramesh Adwant 14 June 2010

SIZE ZERO - women's way to featherweightness GROUND ZERO - terrorists' traumatic torment of twin towers.

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