We walked along the dusty trail,
no shoes upon our feet.
Hot summer day.
The river was not far away,
and we could hardly wait.
No sign of rain.
My sister Sue and cousin Beth,
Rosanna Dunn, and I.
The best of friends.
We saw a snake, but had no fear;
just stayed out of its way.
Left it alone!
We started taking off our clothes
before we reached our spot.
Hang up that bra!
Our clothes were strung along the trail,
hung up where they'd stay dry,
and here's our pool!
The others went to skinny-dip,
one thing I couldn't do.
I chunky-dunked.
Whether you went skinny dipping or chunky dunk, I am sure you enjoyed your time in the water! This has brought a train of childhood memories into me....! Relish the humour!
The river sounds delightful whether skinny dippping or chunky dunking. I can relate to this as I used to be very close to my family and cousins growing up and have fond memories too. I love how you presented the poem and your humor in it is refreshing and delightful. I shall try to find time to do more reading and check out your poetry when I am able. Thank you for reading and commenting on mine as well. :) Aqua
Nicely done, Belle. The last line is truly comedic. I loved it. Thanks for sharing. I've written this reply twice, so don't know if you; ll get to see it. : -)
Great write reminds me of my Long ago childhood. James McLain 🎸
Ha, I can imagine, given your claim of having gained a little weight… Hilarious! 5 *s
Lovely humorous poem. Dear poet, you have a special talent to pen humor. Keep it up. Thanks for sharing
Oh, this is very adorable too! .. Such fun summer memories with friends! .. Definitely 5 Stars! ...+++++
Great write, funny, poignant and always great to be hanging out with friends on those wondrous hot summer days.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is one of your most humorous one to date - thanks for posting!