Smell The Musk In Your Dream Poem by Rini Shibu

Smell The Musk In Your Dream

Rating: 4.9


Sometimes you have to turn around
and face the darkness
The only option you have
for your dreams to come true
You need to walk through
the treacherous ways without fear
There is always a way out
to find the starry sky
Where you could chase
the moon you dreamed for.

Thursday, August 10, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: dreams,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lamar Cole 10 August 2017

Great inspirational poem that gives a person hope.

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Rini Shibu 10 August 2017

Thanks Lam.. Rini

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Robert Murray Smith 28 June 2018

Another beauty. Loved it. So poetic.+++10 Robert

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 August 2017

The moon! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 August 2017

We must see good dream in real life, not in sleeping state, and to let it to come true. As we dream so we gain. This is the positivity and dear Rini, you have so nicely brought it here.... The only option you have for your dreams to come true.. Beautiful presentation.

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Rini Shibu 12 August 2017

Thanks Kumar for the comments..

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Dev Anand 11 August 2017

You need to walk through the treacherous ways without fear Chasing the moon of your heart........ liked this poem very very much.......thank you Dev

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Rini Shibu 11 August 2017

Thanks for your comments Dev

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Jazib Kamalvi 11 August 2017

A good attempt in the chapter of surrealism. You may like to read my poem, Poet Hunter. Thanks

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Rini Shibu 11 August 2017

Thank you so much Jazib..

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