Smile Poem by Reshma Ramesh

Smile

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the master of the sounds that you are
the rustle of the smile that hides
in my voice that you picked tenderly
with your fingertips and placed it
on the sleeve of your heart, may i
ask for it back?

and then you said no, it is yours to keep
the tunes of my smile in your heart they sleep
and when i place my ears on your chest
i can hear my smile and never again it will weep

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pablo Cruise 24 March 2009

A tender glimpse, that made me smile. Very lovely, Reshma.

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Sonya Florentino 24 March 2009

this made me smile (and tear a little) , yes a smile does have a sound.... it's called music!

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Naidz Ladia 16 March 2009

smile relieves pain...smile is an expression of happiness...smile and the world smile with you...cheers.... naizz

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Randy Hogan 12 March 2009

My heart beats of your smile as I speak.. Blame it on the Moon take it out on Venus, Its OK they are yours anyway.... Reshma you have such a gentle touch, You give every word you write, the sweetest kiss..................... Hugssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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ppp sss 11 March 2009

Very beautifully done! You bend and shape your words here as a master.

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Reshma Ramesh

Reshma Ramesh

Bangalore, India
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