So Near Yet So Distant Poem by Reshma Ramesh

So Near Yet So Distant

Rating: 4.1


The day I loved you
My dear, I am all praise for
Your love and compassion,
Attentive gaze, The way you
Look for thorns on my path
The way you warm the air
As I walk in the cold
Evening, the wine you
Sipped I can taste on
Your lips, pull the curtain
Of love around us
I hold you dear, for you
Are my reflection in
The mirror of our love
I see in the depth of
Your eyes, my tears
In the depth of your
Heart, my being beats
In your remembrance.
My love, in my dreams
I see us as one
When I woke, tears flowing
Down my cheeks, your
Hands not here to wipe them
So near yet so distant

Sequel to the poem 'So near yet so distant' from poet Sadiqullah Khan

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

The heart yearning for the great love missed.A ten from me.Very bittersweet.

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Stacey Watts 28 October 2008

Very heartfelt, completely a beautiful masterpiece. Great read.

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Tom Balch 28 October 2008

great piece, well done Reshma.10 from Tom

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Sarwar Chowdhury 28 October 2008

Full of love from the bottom of ya heart! The man is lucky to whom directed at.. remembering- 'Our sweetest songs are those that tell of saddest thought' 10+++++++

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 28 October 2008

very beautiful, thanks for sharing 10

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Colin Jeffery 01 November 2008

Powerful poem well done

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 01 November 2008

kudos.....excellent write.

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Chitra - 30 October 2008

a tender write from an equally tender heart!

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Gargi Saha 30 October 2008

A very romantic poem.10++

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Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello 29 October 2008

Romantic themes in this poem by a sensitive author. However some sensual tones are oriental, just to pay a compliment more than an analysis.

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Reshma Ramesh

Reshma Ramesh

Bangalore, India
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