Elena Sandu


Smile - Poem by Elena Sandu

Smile is my best friend!
Wish I could always keep him close
But sometimes, like a precious rose
He dies too early for no reason
And that, after being spledid
for an entire season!

Topic(s) of this poem: smile


Comments about Smile by Elena Sandu

  • Valsa George (11/19/2014 11:20:00 PM)


    So true! Though I haven't seen you even in a picture, I feel you are a smiling friend who keeps Smile always close to you! At times it can fade.... so natural! Don't worry! Loved the poem! (Report) Reply

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  • Poetheart Morgan (10/10/2012 6:45:00 PM)


    smiling is my shield even when nothing goes right. Laughing at yourself is a great relief. So smile for yourself too! ! Lindíssimo! (Report) Reply

  • Akanksha Bhatt (10/8/2012 11:12:00 AM)


    great poem and i wish you can keep your best friend - smile- always close to you! beautifuly written (Report) Reply

  • Pranab K Chakraborty (10/30/2010 6:12:00 AM)


    Good poem. Smile touches the reders heart as the pain it gives by the fourth line...it dies too early for no reason......yes, it dies without any strong reason. Sorry, perhaps you have written...'He dies to early'.....why HE poet? ....to personify smile as a masculine one? .....why do you give such tolerance to male-sovinism! ....why?

    Short but good. Enjoyed. 10/10

    Regards,
    pranab
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  • Elena Sandu (7/18/2010 3:04:00 AM)


    'A smiler fell hard on the nose to the ground
    And from the lips came instead a
    a sort of crying sound
    Still a smile can always be found
    If the cryer just remember to look around '
    Thank you so much for the comment, lovely done.
    Indeed, unfortunately it is true
    that if we look around
    sometimes we find someone
    to laugh at others cry
    But fortunately, pacient
    enough to be,
    shall look some more
    for sure we will find
    compassion smiles
    maybe even a hand
    to help the cryer stand..
    a paper tish to stop the bleed
    and some plain stuff..
    to stop the pain..
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  • (7/15/2010 10:34:00 AM)


    A smiler fell hard on the nose to the ground
    And from the lips came instead a
    a sort of crying sound
    Still a smile can always be found
    If the cryer just remember to look around

    ; -D
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  • (5/25/2010 2:55:00 AM)


    Smile like millionaire and paint your profile
    10 [with s :) mile]
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
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  • (5/6/2010 9:47:00 PM)


    sweet and agree with your idea..as the smile if my only concern to be there as I say in my famous say.. a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with..afzal shauq... (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (5/3/2010 3:49:00 AM)


    smile is a precious rose! ! ! !
    nice imagery. thank u for sharing.. invite u to read and comment on my poems too.
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  • (4/30/2010 8:55:00 AM)


    Elena your poem made me smile, a ray of sunshine on a dark day!
    Thank You!
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  • Dickson Mseti (4/26/2010 2:49:00 AM)


    smile a wonderful gift of a human. use it to welcome the guest, (Report) Reply

  • Dickson Mseti (4/26/2010 2:48:00 AM)


    smile a wonderful gift of a human. use it to welcome the guest, (Report) Reply

  • (4/24/2010 5:59:00 AM)


    simple and nicely expressed (Report) Reply

  • (4/24/2010 4:34:00 AM)


    Well written! Keep smiling. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 24, 2010

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 24, 2014


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