Smile Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Smile

Rating: 4.6


Smile is a facial expression
It does express the pleasure,
Mouth turns up with amusement
Silent laugh gives mouth leisure.

‘Thank you, please and smile'
Are the keys of heart?
Door of heart is easily opened
These keys open in smart.

Smile says, " I am pleased
I am ever ready"
It too says, "Yes, I did understand
I can do this in sturdy."

In offices or in workshops
Smile alleviates agony and bile,
It persuades a person to work
It works in precious life-file.

Smile of a baby
Does give parent glee,
Mother wants to dandle
But Child does flee.

Truthfulness and nonviolence
Bring a person smile,
People should follow right path
And they should be noble style.

Saturday, February 14, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: smile
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Poet says that smile is a facial expression which expresses pleasure and slight silent laugh. There are three words. These are thanking, please and smile. These are the keys of the heart. The door of the heart opens with these keys easily. Smile indicates the pleasure. Smile says that he or she is ready. In offices or in workshops smile alleviates agony and bile etc. Smile of a baby gives parent gladness. Truthfulness and nonviolence brings smile. People should follow right path. This is the theme of the poem in nutshell. It is written in Deogarh, Odisha, India and is dedicated to the people of the world.
Glossary
Sturdy-robust/hardy
Alleviate-make less severe
Bile-bad temper
Glee-mirth/joy
Flee-run or hurry away
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Salini Nair 15 February 2015

Truthfulness and nonviolence Bring a person smile, People should follow right path And they should be noble style........great words sir

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Valsa George 15 February 2015

Smile is the expression of a contented, joyous and warm heart! Happiness is radiated through a pleasant smile and it is an invitation to others to be bound by love! Sweet poem!

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Akhtar Jawad 15 February 2015

A nice study of smile..........................10

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Vaishnavi Singh 17 February 2015

Loved the feelings of this poem. There need to be some changes like 'Makes' instead of 'bring' and 'there' instead of 'they' in last stanza. The '? ' in 2nd stanza seems improper. I hope this to be helpful for this poem

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Hazel Durham 25 February 2015

A smile can bring joy to our hearts connecting us with people in a happy way, beautiful write that captures the beauty of a smile!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 September 2022

Truthfulness and non-violence are highly essential to keep one smiling always... true

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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 September 2022

Truthful and non-violence are great traits of a good human being.

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Rebecca Navarre 21 January 2021

Honesty brings honesty and kindness brings peace! .. Ever so beautifully expressed! .. Thank you for sharing! .. Definitely 5 Stars plus! ..................

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Rebecca Navarre 21 January 2021

Keys of the heart that start with a smile! .. Smiles bring smiles to the heart! .. Thank you and please also brings cheer

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Khairul Ahsan 10 December 2020

Smile is the index of a happy mind. Both the giver and the recipient of a smile feels happy with the exchange.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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