What Jack says this is his smile,
File?
Cutter cuts nail and is this his style?
Bile!
Jack, uprising nose tells nail is tile,
Pile!
Showing his finger behind nails he runs mile,
Vile?
Jack twisting his eyes indicates to have wile,
Defile!
Still Jack tells cutter, "Please do not revile, "
Abseil!
Wow! Jack's cut nails are running towards sky,
Guy!
Smile of Jack gives a big blowing violet thunder,
Under,
Nail cutter says your nails run towards a drain,
Rain!
Jack tells, I have kept nails in my violet file,
Smile!
© Kumarmani Mahakul,08 November 2018. All rights reserved.
An echo poem! ! Never heard of it before. Found this very amusing! ! ! Thank you
hahahah i really smiled after reading your poem. so you are expressing your smiling side and jovial nature dear poet. thank u. tony
Dear poet, you are very funny. How do you get such idea? I wonder. I hear the sweet fun giving humorous echo of this poem. Your choosing of nail picture is fantastic. Without giggling I cannot stop.
Let me smile more reading this poem. This is wonderful to me. Jack's picture with nail is funny.
A smile wins the heart and a smile motivates mind giving us joy. Every smiling person is joyful to reflect inner feeling. This poem is very fun giving to me.
Wondrous imagery and story line, very humorous! .. Thank you for bringing us smiles! .. :) Thank you for sharing this! .. Ever so very many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++
Of late, you prove that every style yields to your poetic creation. This is unique, quite different from your usual style! I am sure this humorous and beautifully rhyming poem will be greatly relished by children. A sure 10
There's a current of drama and tension running through your words. At the same time, this poem is an ideal rhyme...for children, perhaps. Magnificent work, Kumarmani.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Ha ha ha A funny write of delight. Amazingly humorous specially this line: Wow, Jack's cut nails are running towards sky. Well crafted write.10