Smile We See Inside Veil Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Smile We See Inside Veil

Rating: 5.0


Cloud has covered half
You are smiling within
Dear newborn sun you are
Fresh East is looking at.

We see your smile is new
Inside veil you dwell well
Rosy pink colour of yours
This speaks to us directly.

We see and feel this dawn
This turns to noon sure
Pure mind feels the essence
We witness and write again.

Great is God who creates
Oh dear sun to you in sky
We know you swim in love
To light this Earth you do.

Thursday, December 17, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life,nature,spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 17 December 2015

Inside veil you dwell well. You swim in love to light the earth. Mind-blowing imagery. Great descriptive write.10

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Pushpendra Patel 18 October 2020

Smile inside veil looks so smiling and nice. God is ever great. He care for us. This poem is interesting.

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Aniruddha Pathak 10 July 2019

You have a rare style, dear poet, that reminds one of a child's creativity and freshness. This piece is uplifting.

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Pushpendra Patel 19 February 2019

Great is God who creates the beauty in nature. You have caught a greatest beauty through your poetic eyes. This poem is lovely. Thank you very much for sharing.

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Kelly Kurt 17 December 2015

Your style is always uplifting. Thanks

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 December 2015

A smile brings joy to the heart. Nice work.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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