Cloud has covered half
You are smiling within
Dear newborn sun you are
Fresh East is looking at.
We see your smile is new
Inside veil you dwell well
Rosy pink colour of yours
This speaks to us directly.
We see and feel this dawn
This turns to noon sure
Pure mind feels the essence
We witness and write again.
Great is God who creates
Oh dear sun to you in sky
We know you swim in love
To light this Earth you do.
Smile inside veil looks so smiling and nice. God is ever great. He care for us. This poem is interesting.
You have a rare style, dear poet, that reminds one of a child's creativity and freshness. This piece is uplifting.
Great is God who creates the beauty in nature. You have caught a greatest beauty through your poetic eyes. This poem is lovely. Thank you very much for sharing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Inside veil you dwell well. You swim in love to light the earth. Mind-blowing imagery. Great descriptive write.10