Snowflakes Poem by Patricia Grantham

Snowflakes

Rating: 5.0


A chilly blast of air rushes through the trees
They begin to sway to and fro as if in a trance
The skies change from clear blue to a misty gray
Cool air began to rise and then it began to snow

Winter begins to show its magnificent wonders
As the cold rain turns to brilliant snowflakes
Gently falls to the ground with sparkling majesty
Blanketing the earth like a sea of white glass

Falling to the earth twinkling like crystal stars
Fleeing as the sun peeps out of its hiding place
Melting each snowflake thats unique in every way
Just like a shining jewel fading into the sunlight

Then cleanses the earth with a burst of fresh air
So that the atmosphere will be refreshed and renewed
To be enjoyed and appreciated by every living thing
Fell like frozen tears then warmed by the hands of God


Copyright 2013


Copyright 2013

Snowflakes
Tuesday, May 28, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: snow
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh Rai 02 August 2013

a very imaginative and descriptive write on changing face of nature. it is also made clear that the changes bring refeshness n this nature with our life is renewed. i love the style of writing and choosing common words enabling the common readers to read n understand. a complete poem crafted with high skill n beautiful metaphores. thanks for sharing. with regards

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Adeline Foster 14 July 2013

A lovely, enjoyable poem. read mine - Wide Open Spaces - Adeline

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Heather Wilkins 12 June 2013

a beautiful winter scene.

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R.j. Wynn 11 June 2013

Another great one, what are we going to do with you

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Ken E Hall 10 June 2013

a breath of fresh air this poem on snowflakes with the feeling of the cold around you not much snow in OZ, very nice to read...frozen tears...regards

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Beach Girl 19 September 2013

You paint quite a vivid picture with exquisite words. Love this poem. Gave it a 10

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Noreen Carden 14 September 2013

This is a lovely description of all the wonderful changes that we experience in winter but dont always appreciate well written

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Noreen Carden 14 September 2013

This is a lovely description of all the wonderful changes that we experience in winter but dont always appreciate well written

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Theodora Onken 06 September 2013

This is so very beautiful. From start to finish - and much appreciated as it cooled me down, literally. We are experiencing 100 and above temps here, this day.

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Elena Sandu 20 August 2013

All the pressure gained from an unusual summer heat is soothed away with this poem, I love it, thank you for share!

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Patricia Grantham

Patricia Grantham

Moncks Corner, South Carolina
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