So Long, Yet Far Away (M. V.) Poem by GREENWOLFE 1962

So Long, Yet Far Away (M. V.)

Rating: 5.0


I've often told of her before
And I will tell thee now.
That Autumn many years ago;
It lingers still, somehow.

In glancing up again I saw
The girl I'd seen before.
A maiden dark I still recall,
Too special to ignore.

I stood, this time, not far away.
She seldom came so near.
I hoped and prayed she'd notice me.
Why was I gripped with fear?

She wore a cloth of simple spin.
Twas not much I confess.
It dawned on me, as she approached,
I thought of her no less.

The closer to her sphere I drew,
The nearer more she came;
I realized and then could tell,
True love, was sure to blame.

She pushed her glasses on her nose,
So better she might see.
Then smiled a most delightful grin;
And looked so sweet at me.

I couldn't speak a word back then.
She mesmerized you know.
I doubt if she could comprehend
How much I loved her so.

She said, ' Hello ', and touched my arm
And winked a little too;
Then turned her head and stroked her hair,
The way girls like to do.

My eyes met hers, and there they are;
As ever they have stayed.
I wondered then, as I do now.
What mistake had I made?

She talked as though she knew me well,
Though we'd met but once before.
Twas then I knew, this love was doomed.
I'd lost at love, once more.

She said she couldn't stay too long.
She had to meet someone.
As if to make it, oh so clear;
I'd never be the one.

She didn't have to bother though,
I knew it anyway.
Another love, was mine to keep;
So long, yet far away.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
samar Halabi 22 July 2008

simply very great thanks

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Mark Nwagwu 22 July 2008

Wolfey, you say you're one of the few poets in modern time who write in rhythm and rhyme - inded you are and this great work of words and beat is sensational. The rhyme flows not only from the pen but from the heart deeply and it's all so so sweet. Easily a 10 from me, when I can vote - i hope I can.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 22 July 2008

Life is filled with series of disappointments one successful wish is fulfillment great job Sir, sathya narayana

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Coach Roth 21 July 2008

Poignant...can't decide if the sadness should be real though...but decidely, I think we have all experienced seeing someone and feeling a 'connection' only to find it never develops...real, or wishful thinking...who's to say...provocative...Coach

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Ernestine Northover 21 July 2008

This is so beautifully written Greenwolfe, and such a pleasure to read. the flow was excellent and the sentiment a delight. Well done indeed. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Cristy Upshaw 09 June 2009

love always seems to work that way doesn't it. just when you think they are the one and you seem so happy, it gets stripped from you. very touching and heartfelt piece.

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Meggie Gultiano 06 February 2009

oh, oh, tsk, tsk, thought it had a happy ending..nevertheless, this is a lovely and romantic

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Teresa Dearing 05 January 2009

Love at first sight.... sigh. Have you thought about a novel? ? ? T

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Gone with the wind 29 July 2008

That was simply awesome....I loved it

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Crystal Ciuba 24 July 2008

simply and truly beautiful! your poem makes me smile, you are a true poet

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