So Many Questions Poem by Lyn Paul

So Many Questions

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Can't you hold on while the trees grow?
Can't we together, watch the wind blow?
Can we not walk along the beach as we always did?
And talk all night until we fall asleep

Can I survive without you each day?
Will this darkness ever... go away?
My life was so perfect... Yet now time is standing still
Now I must go on... I CAN and I WILL!

I can be strong, just for you I will
You have given me so much, your courage and your love
I will now remember you watching me from above

With you being so strong, This will make me stronger
I shall move on... Knowing your love and your strength will follow





Copyright Reserved May 2014
LYN PAUL

Saturday, August 4, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 07 December 2017

Can I survive without you each day? Will this darkness ever... go away? but i shall go on because you gave me strength........ sweet memories of the one who was loved and gave love always remain in us and help us to move on........ such memories are the sweetest....... you have it and you are blessed to have it......... thank u for this fine poem, delicate poem of love. it speaks your mind full of love. tony

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Bri Edwards 23 April 2017

yes, questions. will 'we' ever know the answers? doubt it. i liked the switch from 2 can'ts to 1 can we not. and from 5 wills to 1 shall and then back to a will. where there are 5 wills and a one shall, there SHALL be a way! bri :) to MyPoemList. and to my/our May showcase. bri :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 April 2016

Will this darkness ever go away? ! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Jak Black 27 July 2015

Wow! Such determination. A very touching piece, Lyn. Hope this one isn't from experience. 'I will now remember you, watching from above'. I assume this is about a love that has passed on, all too quickly. A lovely poem, heartfelt.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 June 2015

Can I survive without you each day? Will this darkness ever... go away? My life was so perfect... Yet now time is standing still Now I must go on... I CAN and I WILL! ..........philosophical write related to God through many questions. We can't survive without God. However the darkness is, it must go way. True and groovy imagination. Thanks for posting......10

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