Solitude Tanka Poem by LeeAnn Azzopardi

Solitude Tanka

Rating: 5.0

I sit on the bench
Waiting for you to show up
But you didn't arrive
As the rain begins to fall
The solitude becomes

Saturday, March 23, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: solitude
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 23 March 2024

Fine piece..... great to read.....

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Indira Renganathan 05 April 2024

When the rain falls solitude is more felt...the abrupt ending uplifts the content so beautifully...liked a lot...tfs

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Sylvia Frances Chan 24 March 2024

5 Stars for your brilliant Tanka, dear LeeAnn. The mosr perfect name for this Tanka.

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Rob Lamberton 23 March 2024

I can feel the emptiness of a world without the last word

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Richard Wlodarski 23 March 2024

I can feel the depth of your loneliness. Such powerful writing will lead to a metamorphosis, LeeAnn!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 March 2024

A wonderful Tanka on solitude. Top score! !

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