Sometimes Poem by Neela Nath Das

Sometimes

Rating: 5.0


I wish to have a pair
of wings,
To fly.
Sometimes....
You there,
behind
I'm following
you!
At night,
when
you prepare
to have sleep
with other!
Surprised you,
touching my feather,
will hug
me and
the rest story,
will surpass
a fairy tale.....
Sometimes,
my imagination,
rides on a Dream-Mail!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Farah Ilyas 16 June 2013

simple but beautiful imagery poem...slightly falls into heart

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R.j. Wynn 16 June 2013

Awesome, check out Stardust.

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David Wood 17 June 2013

I agree with Farah below, simple imagery flows better.

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Heather Wilkins 21 June 2013

sometimes my imagination rides on a dream-mail. nice thought.

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Heather Wilkins 21 June 2013

sometimes my imagination rides on a dream-mail. nice

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R.j. Wynn 22 July 2013

The tale of the two love birds.

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Patricia Grantham 05 July 2013

Wanting to fly is a feeling that we all have had at one time or another. We have flown in our dreams and it can feel so real. Up, up and away! I have a poem called If I Can Fly Feel free to read when you have time.

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Unwritten Soul 02 July 2013

Divided segments here, for us easy to get and dissolve all the feeling in it, nice_Soul

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 25 June 2013

Imagination is the art of mind..so colourful

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Valerie Dohren 23 June 2013

Great story of imagination - we poets all float on such feathers.

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