ramesh rai

Gold Star - 25,855 Points (13.12.1955 / howrah)

Soul - Poem by ramesh rai

No one has seen
it has no shape
but it is said
life is alive
till there is soul in the body.
after departure of soul
from the body, life becomes dead

Comments about Soul by ramesh rai

  • (4/14/2012 8:49:00 PM)

    Great poem Ramesh.....but atleast we can see and read Unwritten Soul's work! (Report) Reply

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  • (4/13/2012 11:04:00 PM)

    do you mean life is alive while there is soul in the body?
    If till it means life exists without soul and soul exists without life.
    That means something but I'm not sure what?
    That's something I haven't thought about.
    I wonder if that's what you want me to think about?
    I'll think about it anyway.
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  • Unwritten Soul (4/13/2012 10:19:00 AM)

    It's true and true...we cant see but it exist, we can see but we can feel...lot of things we can see but we can explain and we cant see but we understand...how it be? maybe it just a part of us that we need to look at as Unwritten Soul hahahaha...nice definition, like it Ramesh! _Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Wahab Abdul (4/12/2012 11:27:00 PM)

    a very good attempt.....to define the soul.....a pet theme of every poet, , , i have written one......'' a handful of air is the soul ''...........i like this poem.... (Report) Reply

  • Kevin East (4/5/2012 12:32:00 PM)

    So true.
    Simple but our souls are the real us.
    (Report) Reply

  • (4/5/2012 10:40:00 AM)

    A great poem and right to the point. A great write. (Report) Reply

  • Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (4/4/2012 9:49:00 PM)

    how navely and simply you said about soul.
    pl read my metaphisics poem [the concept of the soul] without fail. it is in this site in alph order..
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 4, 2012

Poem Edited: Wednesday, April 4, 2012

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