Soul Poem by ramesh rai

Soul

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Soul!
No one has seen
it has no shape
but it is said
life is alive
till there is soul in the body.
after departure of soul
from the body, life becomes dead

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 04 April 2012

how navely and simply you said about soul. pl read my metaphisics poem [the concept of the soul] without fail. it is in this site in alph order..

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Dave Walker 05 April 2012

A great poem and right to the point. A great write.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 14 April 2012

Great poem Ramesh.....but atleast we can see and read Unwritten Soul's work!

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Douglas Scotney 13 April 2012

do you mean life is alive while there is soul in the body? If till it means life exists without soul and soul exists without life. That means something but I'm not sure what? That's something I haven't thought about. I wonder if that's what you want me to think about? I'll think about it anyway.

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Unwritten Soul 13 April 2012

It's true and true...we cant see but it exist, we can see but we can feel...lot of things we can see but we can explain and we cant see but we understand...how it be? maybe it just a part of us that we need to look at as Unwritten Soul hahahaha...nice definition, like it Ramesh! _Unwritten Soul

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Wahab Abdul 12 April 2012

a very good attempt.....to define the soul.....a pet theme of every poet, , , i have written one......'' a handful of air is the soul ''...........i like this poem....

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Kevin East 05 April 2012

So true. Simple but our souls are the real us.

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