Spring adorned desires
When drizzled in rainbow colours
Pearls blossomed in bewitching hour
While breaths bathed in dews.
Nectar dripped from the lips
While I plucked a petal
From the rosy memories
One beautiful face rose up
From the crystalline stream
Just one face, grasped my memories!
© 2016 Geetha Jayakumar. All rights reserved
Lovely! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Nectar dripped from the lips While I plucked a petal From the rosy memories- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - I found these lines so particularly charming and alluring, Geetha. It is one of the joys in reading poetry to come across such fresh and evocative images and I thank you so much for sharing them.....10+++++ on this Spring of Desires
'One beautiful face rose up From the crystalline stream Just one face, grasped my memories! ' - That's a wonderful expression Geetha, very evocative. Loved this short poem.
An impressive heart crushing and animated image is emerging slowly. A nice poetic imagination, Geetha. Thank you very much.
A petal from rosy memories says the poem I felt the poem is a pearl from the memory of shells.
Hello Geetha, So beautifully penned with exquisite imagery. One beautiful face rose up from the crystalline stream. Wish i knew whose beautiful face it was! ! ! :) Lovely poem
Impressive work...Virtually flawless stanzaic structure moves with the glide of a shiny new coin tossed across a freshly glaced ice-pond...Stellar crafting & imagescape, indeed. ~FjR~
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
One beautiful face rose up From the crystalline stream Just one face, grasped my memories! This indeed beautiful Geetha....! Lovely words couched in the fervent emotion of love!
Thank you Valsa.