Stay With Me Poem by Valerie Dohren

Stay With Me

Rating: 4.9


Stay just one more day with me
Don`t fly away or sail the sea
Stay and soothe my trembling heart
Stay that we may never part

Do not wander far away
Stay with me just one more day
Lay your head upon my arm
Stay with me and keep me warm

Stay until the sun doth set
Stay so close that I won`t fret
You and I will watch the moon
Do not leave me yet, so soon

Stay, my love, please stay awhile
Stay with me that I may smile
Please don`t go and leave me here
Sad without you, stay my dear

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sally Plumb Plumb 27 June 2012

Lovely to see a love poem from you, Val.

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Simon Collins 25 June 2012

Really moving, beautiful words

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The Poet Darkling 22 June 2012

This is absolutely lovely! So heartfelt and packed with emotion! I'm giving you a standing ovation! !

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Linda May Fox 20 June 2012

This is so beautiful!

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Juan Olivarez 20 June 2012

Ah yes a true lament of a heart sorrowful for the departure of a loved one. so beautiful val.

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Walterrean Salley 16 July 2012

So rich and telling. Full of the purest of emotions, straight from the heart. Beautifully expressed. Thank you for sharing it.

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Sylvia Lukeman 05 July 2012

I find myself very comfortable within the words of your poem.This poem is beautiful. Thank your for your very kind comments about my poems I hope to get back to you poetry very soon..Warm wishes Sylvia

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James Cecil 02 July 2012

Loved it! Simple and true. Are not simple gifts the best?

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The Reader 02 July 2012

Just? one more day? will that suffice dear poet? it's an earnest request, plz make it timeless-

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Meena Mustafa 01 July 2012

Such a romantic poem :) made me smile :))))))

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