Stay With Me Poem by Valerie Dohren

Stay With Me

Rating: 4.9


Stay just one more day with me
Don`t fly away or sail the sea
Stay and soothe my trembling heart
Stay that we may never part

Do not wander far away
Stay with me just one more day
Lay your head upon my arm
Stay with me and keep me warm

Stay until the sun doth set
Stay so close that I won`t fret
You and I will watch the moon
Do not leave me yet, so soon

Stay, my love, please stay awhile
Stay with me that I may smile
Please don`t go and leave me here
Sad without you, stay my dear

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 18 June 2012

Wow! What a beautiful romantic poem that took my breath away! You know my dear friend that when it comes to matters of the heart I truly shake! Beautiful and touching! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it! God Bless. You!

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Neela Nath Das 18 June 2012

Very earnest poetic request. Well-crafted, romantic and heart-warming.

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Romeo Della Valle 18 June 2012

Wow! What a beautiful romantic poem that took my breath away! You know my dear friend that when it comes to matters of the heart I truly shake! Beautiful and touching! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it! God Bless. You!

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Ramesh Rai 19 June 2012

Stay until the sun doth set Stay so close that I won`t fret You and I will watch the moon Do not leave me yet, so soon Beautiful.

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Hans Vr 19 June 2012

Beautiful and thoughtful poem, Valerie. We want our loved ones to stay. So nicely and melodiously expressed.

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Walterrean Salley 16 July 2012

So rich and telling. Full of the purest of emotions, straight from the heart. Beautifully expressed. Thank you for sharing it.

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Sylvia Lukeman 05 July 2012

I find myself very comfortable within the words of your poem.This poem is beautiful. Thank your for your very kind comments about my poems I hope to get back to you poetry very soon..Warm wishes Sylvia

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James Cecil 02 July 2012

Loved it! Simple and true. Are not simple gifts the best?

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The Reader 02 July 2012

Just? one more day? will that suffice dear poet? it's an earnest request, plz make it timeless-

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Meena Mustafa 01 July 2012

Such a romantic poem :) made me smile :))))))

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