Stay With Me Tonight ❤️~ Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Stay With Me Tonight ❤️~

Rating: 4.8


On the wings of wishes
Upon the waves of emotions
I travelled alone in my thoughts
Crossing the bridge of relationships
Swiftly to the corner of the understanding
Where all the fears were hanging on the hopes
Tonight I wish to hold your hands for a joyride
I wish to light a lamp of love in your heart
It will guide, when we grow old together
Tonight's moon is in crescent form
The only star besides it is 'Me'
Stay with me tonight.

Sunday, October 4, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
L Milton Hankins 04 October 2020

I liked this poem, particularly its stirring imagery. Several of the phrases were very quotable, i.e. " Crossing the bridge of relationships" and " on the wings of wishes."

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Kostas Lagos 04 October 2020

Another good one! Well written my friend!

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Rajnish Manga 04 October 2020

What a beautiful romantic poetry you have composed and I think this is the right time (it's 12 at night) to sit in silence and relish its charm through my heart and soul with closed eyes. The freshness and the scent of its sentiments belongs to each lover of this world. Thanks, Asim ji.

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Darren Jkoeryo 04 October 2020

Class poem On the wings of wishes Upon the waves of emotions I travelled alone in my thoughts Crossing the bridge of relationships

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Zuzu Mutairi 04 October 2020

Format and poem both are really interesting, Full marks.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 October 2020

Crescent moon is giving invitation to natural love to bloom in full shape in next day. This poem is very interesting one.

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Deepak S S 04 October 2020

When we grow old with need memories to cherish and good memories are are being billed when we are young this poem is a very e artistic in a way that it request the lover to remain with to make the memories

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Unwritten Soul 04 October 2020

May it shine at every corner for your heart so even at darkest night there is constellation of love to bright

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Sharad Bhatia 04 October 2020

Good morning sir, Really beautiful poem about silence love Thankyou for sharing such a beautiful poem 1000++

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Jasmine Shayma 04 October 2020

Whole night is eternity. Once you promise you will support i m read.

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