Stepping Down Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Stepping Down

Rating: 5.0


As dusk has given invitation,
Sun has accepted to travel,
Towards west direction in joy,
Walking below from sky of love,
Through iron staircase of heaven,
Step by step sun is setting.

Sun is setting down to steep
The golden rosy aroma of dusk,
Flavour of day has soften more,
A new desire has grown of course,
To transform old age into youth,
Sun still is not smiling anymore,
Being calm and thoughtful now,
Sun is doing setting journey.

There is no doubt of victory,
There is no repent for defeat,
Sun doing his duty selflessly,
Without any attachment in day,
Now sun is travelling peacefully
To meet another half of the world,
Dusk is here to invite the night
At the same time dawn is there,
Sun is old here setting down now,
At the same time sun is child there,
Weather of affection is giving call,
For reincarnation or sunrise in care.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,14 July 2018. All rights reserved.

Stepping Down
Saturday, July 14, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,philosophical ,sun,sunset
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Cover photo © Kumarmani Mahakul,14 July 2018. All rights reserved.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Murray Smith 14 July 2018

Great poem- - - - - - - - - -

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 14 July 2018

A very beautifully shown sunset of course with a loudly sung melody ' tis just lovely KM JI

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 July 2018

Wonderful poem! Thanks dear sir for sharing....10

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 December 2018

Journey! ! Beauty of life! Step by step. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mj Lemon 25 July 2018

Magnificent Kumarmani. I am reminded of the circle of being. What is a demise can simultaneously be a birth or rebirth. So wonderfully expressed, Kumarmani.

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Valsa George 16 July 2018

Besides being a poet, you are a great photographer too! Love your clicks!

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Mahtab Bangalee 15 July 2018

Weather of affection is giving call, For reincarnation............ nicely penned

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 July 2018

A wonderful poem on nature. Compelling imagery. The beauty and wonders of the sun are portrayed beautifully.10++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul

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Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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