Stepping Out Poem by subodh pandey

Stepping Out

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in the vast nowhere
with our voilent instinct, we leave
but every parting has a space in us
we have left is a one thing and ah
other is our mirrored freedom.
but is there any way past memories,
for its completion it creates a world of its own,
full of vivid colors,
as if oil spilled on water.
in the interface, you rythmically occur
as a stroke too bold on canvas.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 13 October 2012

Beautiful poem very insightful and deep!

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Allemagne Roßmann 21 August 2011

is there any way past memories, for its completion it creates a world of its own, full of vivid colors, Very poignant write..words are stepping stone for your poetry

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